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(Frage) beantwortet  | | Datum: | 14:09 Mo 05.10.2009 | | Autor: | Dinker |
Hallo Wäre sehr dankbar um Korrektur
More about the relevance of this topic you will experience soon. I hope your knowledge about this topic aren’t very “broad”, so that I can supply you with many new things.
At first I will tell you about the history of greenhouse effect. For example do you know when this word was used the first time?
Afterwards I will take a look in the future and predict the development.
I think the most important follows next, by ilustrating how we can reduce the seriousness of the consequences.
As you can see I don’t want reduce my presentation of the green house effect, but also give information about the impact of this process, because this lead to a better understanding of the whole subject.
Vielen Dnak
Gruss Dinker
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(Antwort) fertig  | | Datum: | 18:10 Mo 05.10.2009 | | Autor: | leduart |
Hallo
Nur Fehler, nicht den Stil verbessert:
> Hallo Wäre sehr dankbar um Korrektur
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> More about the relevance of this topic you will experience
experience ist hier kein passendes Wort. hear vielleicht?
Satzstellung:
You will hear more....
> soon. I hope your knowledge about this topic (aren’t)
isn"t very
> “broad”, so that I can supply you with many new things.
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> At first I will tell you about the history of greenhouse
> effect. For example do you know when this word was used the
> first time?
>
> Afterwards I will take a look in the future and predict the
> development.
>
> I think the most important follows next, by ilustrating how
> we can reduce the seriousness of the consequences.
> As you can see I don’t want
want to
> reduce my presentation of the
> green house effect, but also give information about the
> impact of this process, because this lead
leads
(den Fehler machst du zu oft!)
> to a better
> understanding of the whole subject.
Gruss leduart
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