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(Frage) beantwortet  | | Datum: | 15:29 Di 09.02.2021 | | Autor: | cheezy |
| Aufgabe | TOPIC: Environment and Pollution
You are a climate adviser for the British government. You have been invited by Channel 4 to talk about the recently published report calling for urgent actions taken by the government to “future-proof” the country.
Start the interview introducing yourself and your work
Explain why the UK is poorly prepared for the impact of global warming
Talk about the committee´s recently published recommendations.
Give information about its five “priority areas” suggested in the first report
Present some of the impacts of global warming and the measures that must be taken in order to address them.
Say what you do in order not to contribute to global warming
Talk about other addictions that have a great impact on a person´s life
Hallo liebes Forum,
da ich im Juni eine sehr wichtige Prüfung habe, bin ich auf der Suche nach jemanden, der mir vll meinen Text Korrektur lesen könnte? Ich wäre sehr dankbar.
Mit freundlichen Grüßen |
Hello,
My name is Christian and I’m working as a climate adviser for the British government. Today I want to give some advises how we can save our ominous planet. The main problem in our society is that we don’t how to cope with this global warming, because the politicians are good in talking and planning, but less good at acting. Another reason is that our politicians are in a good relation with the car lobbyism. So if more cars are sold, there will be a increase of pollution in the air. Our economic will be starched but not our only environment. So in the future it leads to a unavoidable climate crisis. Now I want to mention some recommendations of the committee´s recently. For the future buildings should have a better insulation and should be protected against heat waves and flooding. In every home there should be grey water systems to replace purified tapwater with recycled water for gardens and toilets. If we were not able to change our behaviour in front of our environment, then we would have to fight with climate problems such as flooding, drought and heat waves. So the right measures are that more people have to be aware about this topic. More and more letters of editors should written about this alarming situation to newspapers and the media can publish it and address all the widespread people. In this case the awareness of climate crysis will be wake up und the people can change their behaviour. The measures that I consider is that I check my water meters after every shower, so I can ensure that my wateruse was carefully.
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(Antwort) fertig  | | Datum: | 17:11 Mi 10.02.2021 | | Autor: | Infinit |
And once again....
Best,
Infinit
> TOPIC: Environment and Pollution
>
> You are a climate adviser for the British government. You
> have been invited by Channel 4 to talk about the recently
> published report calling for urgent actions taken by the
> government to “future-proof” the country.
>
> Start the interview introducing yourself and your work
>
> Explain why the UK is poorly prepared for the impact of
> global warming
>
> Talk about the committee´s recently published
> recommendations.
>
>
>
> Give information about its five “priority areas”
> suggested in the first report
>
> Present some of the impacts of global warming and the
> measures that must be taken in order to address them.
>
> Say what you do in order not to contribute to global
> warming
>
> Talk about other addictions that have a great impact on a
> person´s life
>
> Hallo liebes Forum,
>
> da ich im Juni eine sehr wichtige Prüfung habe, bin ich
> auf der Suche nach jemanden, der mir vll meinen Text
> Korrektur lesen könnte? Ich wäre sehr dankbar.
>
> Mit freundlichen Grüßen
> Hello,
> My name is Christian and I’m working as a climate
> adviser for the British government. Today I want to give
> some advises [advise] how we can save our ominous planet. The main
> problem in our society is that we don’t [know] how to cope with
> this global warming, because the politicians are good in
> talking and planning, but less good at [in] acting. Another
> reason is that our politicians are in a good relation with
> the car lobbyism. So if more cars are sold, there will be a
> increase of [air] pollution in the air [delete the last three words]. Our economic[s] will be
> starched but not our only [unique] environment. So in the future it
> leads to a unavoidable climate crisis. Now I want to
> mention some [of the recent ]recommendations of the committee´s recently. [delete: recently]
> For the [delete: For the] future buildings should have a better insulation
> and should be protected against heat waves and flooding. In
> every home there should be grey water systems to replace
> purified tapwater with recycled water for gardens and
> toilets. If we were not able to change our behaviour in
> front of our environment, then we would have to fight with
> climate problems such as flooding, drought and heat waves.
> So the right measures are that more people have to be aware
> about this topic. More and more letters of editors should [be]
> written about this alarming situation to newspapers and the
> media can publish it and [address all the widespread people how about: and spread this message].
> In this case the awareness of climate crysis [crisis] will be wake
> up [raised]und [and]the people can change their behaviour. The measures
> that I consider is that I check my water meters after every
> shower, so I can ensure that my [wateruse was carefully how about: use of water is appropriate].
>
>
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(Antwort) fertig | | Datum: | 21:06 Do 11.02.2021 | | Autor: | chrisno |
> > Start the interview introducing yourself and your work
> Hello,
> My name is Christian and I’m working as a climate
> adviser for the British government.
Minimalversion
> > Explain why the UK is poorly prepared for the impact of
> > global warming
> Today I want to give
> some advises
advice oder I want to advise you ...
> how we can save our ominous planet. The main
> problem in our society is that we don’t how to cope with
> this
ohne this
> global warming, because the politicians are good in
> talking and planning, but less good at acting. Another
> reason is that our politicians are in a good relation with
> the car lobby.
> So if more cars are sold, there will be a
> increase of pollution in the air. Our
economy
> will be
> starched but not our only environment. So in the future it
> leads to a unavoidable climate crisis.
Das trifft die Aufgabe nur am Rand.
> > Talk about the committee´s recently published
> > recommendations.
> Now I want to
> mention some recommendations of the committee´s recently.
Übernimm die Formulierung aus dem Aufgabentext.
> For the future buildings should have a better insulation
> and should be protected against heat waves and flooding. In
> every home there should be grey water systems to replace
> purified tapwater with recycled water for gardens and
> toilets. If we
are
> not able to change our behaviour in
> front of our
in front of habe ich nicht gefunden
> environment, then we
will
> have to fight with
> climate problems such as flooding, drought and heat waves.
Ich schlage vor, dies am Anfang zu verschieben und dann zu erklären, warum UK nicht ausreichend vorbereitet ist.
> > Give information about its five “priority areas”
> > suggested in the first report
fehlt
> > Present some of the impacts of global warming and the
> > measures that must be taken in order to address them.
> So the right measures are that more people have to be aware
> about this topic.
Nur ein measure.
> More and more letters of editors should
> written about this alarming situation to newspapers and the
> media can publish it and address all the widespread
warum widespread?
> people.
> In this case the awareness of climate crysis will be wake
> up und the people can change their behaviour.
> > Say what you do in order not to contribute to global
> > warming
> The
measure
ist nur eine sollten aber mehrere sein
> that I consider is that I check my water meters after every
> shower, so I can ensure that my wateruse was carefully.
that I did use water carefully.
Das PRoblem war aber noch nicht angesprochen.
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> > Talk about other addictions that have a great impact on a
> > person´s life
Altlast?
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(Mitteilung) Reaktion unnötig  | | Datum: | 11:25 Di 23.02.2021 | | Autor: | cheezy |
Ich bedanke mich für eure Hilfen :)
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