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(Frage) beantwortet  | | Datum: | 21:07 Di 19.01.2010 | | Autor: | MonaMoe |
| Aufgabe | Another possibility that comes from the Internet is the global sourcing. The companies focus their purchasing policy is no longer national, but from a global to buy in the states where the production has the highest cost advantages. Trade barriers between states are being dismantled, the production factor capital is used worldwide, and mobile and new communications technologies are limitless applied.
Businesses that close to this new development, or to take up only half-heartedly, in a short time lose their competitiveness. In this work, are important economic sectors, which are caused by the impact of the Internet on the buying and selling of goods and commodities, defined and explained in more detail. |
Ich bitte um Korrektur meines Textabschnitts.
Vielen Dank im Voraus
Mona
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Hey,
> Another possibility that comes from the Internet is the
anstatt that comes würde ich "coming" schreiben
> global sourcing. The companies focus their purchasing
> policy is no longer national
das klingt ein wenig kompliziert ausgedrückt
, but from a global to buy in
> the states where the production has the highest cost
> advantages. Trade barriers between states are being
> dismantled, the production factor capital is used
meinst du dass Kapital als produktionsfaktor weltweit genutzt wird?? so hört es sich zumindest an... Vielleicht uch hier eine simplere und eindeutigerer formulierung
> worldwide. New communications technologies
> are limitless applied, for ex.... .
> Businesses that close to this new development, or to take
close --> are not open to these developments, lose in a short time lose their competitiveness.
> up only half-heartedly, in a short time lose their
> competitiveness. In this work, are important economic
> sectors, which are caused by the impact of the Internet on
> the buying and selling of goods and commodities, defined
> and explained in more detail.
defined and explained in more detail hört sich so angehängt an und schließ den text nicht so wirklich ab, finde ich; ist aber ok soweit.
LG
pythagora
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(Frage) beantwortet | | Datum: | 21:53 Di 19.01.2010 | | Autor: | MonaMoe |
| Aufgabe | | close --> are not open to these developments, lose in a short time lose their competitiveness. |
Hallo,
vielen Dank für die Antworten.
Leider hab ich nur nicht verstanden wie ich "close --> are not open to these developments, lose in a short time lose their competitiveness." einsetzen soll. Ich krieg den Satz nicht zusammen, deswegen bitte ich noch einmal um Hilfe.
Danke
Mona
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Hallo,
> close --> are not open to these developments, lose in a
> short time lose their competitiveness.
Oh, da hab ich mich wohl ein wenig vertippt. SORRY fr die Verwirrung, so ist's richtig:
Businesses that are not open to these developments lose lose their competitiveness in a short time .
LG
pythagora
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