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(Frage) beantwortet  | | Datum: | 17:58 Mi 09.01.2008 | | Autor: | GlamGirL |
| Aufgabe | Ich habe diese Frage in keinem Forum auf anderen Internetseiten gestellt
short story "caged" analysis |
Hallo leute :) ich bin letzens auf diese shortsory gestossen..und habe versucht sie zu analysieren... leider mache ich sehr viele fehler könnt ihr mir sie hierbei korriegieren ..und mir vill tipps geben wie ich sätze besser schreiben kan oder wan ich mercke was wo dran kommt=) wäre super nett !
This Story ist about a man named Mr.Purcell who has his own pet shop.He sells all different animals and prescribes remdle for ailing canaries.One day in a wintry morning as Mr.Purcell eads the newspaper a customer cames into his shop .Mr.purcell doesnt hears him but as he sees him he gets some nervous.hey sais out of habbid "good morning" while he observes. The strange man asks hin for doves and points and waits for his reaction.As the man hears that..He was so abviously disappointend "five dollars fifty".The man explains mr. purcell hox long he must works at a hard labor for this price"ten years to earn five dollars".Mr purcell wipes his fore heat and doesn`t knwo wha he can do now.The man puts the five dollars fifty on the counter takes the doves, go out tassed them into the air.Mr.purcell startto be very angry and doesn`t understand the man.
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(Frage) beantwortet | | Datum: | 18:07 Mi 09.01.2008 | | Autor: | GlamGirL |
| Aufgabe | hat makes "cades" a typical short story? Analyse tthe typical characteristics...
könnt ihr mir sachen aufzählen die ich vergessen hab? :)neen der korrektur dankeeee =) |
The story "caged" is a typical short story because this story haves the typical mainpoints.The main characters are the man mr.Purcel and the unknown trange customer.Inmy opinion is the climax in line(36-40).a s the customer lets the doves fly away.The exposition in this story is that Mr.Pucell goes in his pet shop and sees the unkown manThis story have short period of time because this story is only about the action n this pet shop.The setting in this story is in mr.Purcell pet shop.The denouement is in ine 36 40 where as the custome drows out the doves and tossed into the air..
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Hallo GlamGirl ![[winken]](/images/smileys/winken.gif "[winken]") ,
> The story "cCaged" is a typical short story because thise
> story haves the typical main points.The main characters are
> the man mMr.Purcel and the unknown strange customer.In my
> opinion is the a climax in line (36-40) [red]36-40 "ZITAT"[/ref].a s the customer lets
> the doves fly away.The exposition in this story is that
> Mr.Pucell goes in his pet shop and sees the unkown man. This
> story haveplays in a short period of time because this story it is only
> about the action in thise pet shop where the setting is, too..The setting in this story
> is in mr.Purcell pet shop.The denouement is in line 36 to 40
> where as the custome drows out frees the doves and tossed into
> the air..
LG
Sarah 
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(Mitteilung) Reaktion unnötig  | | Datum: | 23:26 Mi 09.01.2008 | | Autor: | GlamGirL |
jaaa in allemw as du gefragt hast hast du richtig gelegn..ich sag doch ich mach voll die blöden fehler dankeschön =)echt lieb von dir =)
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