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(Frage) beantwortet  | | Datum: | 17:27 Mi 20.11.2013 | | Autor: | Dom_89 |
Hallo,
nach ein paar Jahren ohne Englisch musst ich nun wieder frei einen Text schreiben bzw. eine Geschichte nach vorgegebenen Gesichtspunkten zu Ende schreiben. Es wäre nett, wenn einer von euch diesen einmal lesen könnte und mir die Fehler anstreichen könnte:
"After Tom has checked the house of the judge he has called the police again because he has found nobody in the house. Later he was driving down the road an saw the judge with some police officers. While he was parking his car he saw that Bill was standing at the group, too. After he has parking his car at the street he asked everybody what their happened this night. The judge answered that this was a big test for him."
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(Antwort) fertig  | | Datum: | 08:05 Do 21.11.2013 | | Autor: | chrisno |
Mit dem üblichen disclaimer: ich habe keine formale Qualifikation
Das ganze soll in der Vergangenheit sein. Bitte nimm Dir eine Grammatik und schau nach, wann welche Zeitform benutzt wird.
"After Tom hasd checked the house of the judge he has called
the police again because he has found nobody did not find anybody in the house.
Later he was driving down the road and saw the judge with
some police officers. While he was parking his car he saw
that Bill was standing at with the group, too. After he has
parking his car at the street he asked everybody what their
happened this night. The judge answered that this was a big
test for him."
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