Write a short report < Korrekturlesen < Englisch < Sprachen < Vorhilfe
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(Frage) beantwortet  | | Datum: | 10:09 Di 13.09.2005 | | Autor: | suzan |
Imagine you are a reporter at the scene of an accident. Write a short report (about 100 words) about what has just happend. Use the present perfect.
Start like this:
This is John Taylor, BBC news speaking. Here we are at the scene of an accident.
The Jaguar was driving at very high speed. The driver came from Hamburgerstreet and wanted to turn right, into Lübeck Road. Then there was the crash.
The police cars was there and asked the people what happend.
It's nobody harried, only car body damage.
The driver of the Jaguar was fault, because he was driving very high speed and he hasn't looked for another car drivers.
This was BBC and the news speacking.
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ist das so in Ordnung?
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Hi Suzan
> Imagine you are a reporter at the scene of an accident.
> Write a short report (about 100 words) about what has just
> happend. Use the present perfect.
>
> Start like this:
>
> This is John Taylor, BBC news speaking. Here we are at the
> scene of an accident.
> The Jaguar was driving at very high speed. The driver came
> from Hamburgerstreet and wanted to turn right, into Lübeck
> Road. Then there was the crash.
sehr gut
> The police cars was there and asked the people what
> happend.
The police car was there, oder the police cars were there and police men asked the people what has happend.
die Autos können nichts fragen, das müssen schon Menschen machen.
> It's nobody harried, only car body damage.
Nobody got hurt, it was only car body damage. klingt besser
> The driver of the Jaguar was fault, because he was driving
> very high speed and he hasn't looked for another car
> drivers.
The driver of the Jaguar was at fault, because he was driving too fast and he hasn´t looked for another car.
Man schaut sich ja nach autos um, nicht nach fahrern.
> This was BBC and the news speacking.
This was BBC and John Taylor speaking.
die news können nicht sprechen
LG
Britta
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(Mitteilung) Reaktion unnötig  | | Datum: | 10:34 Di 13.09.2005 | | Autor: | suzan |
danke :o)
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