an experiment in luxury < Korrekturlesen < Englisch < Sprachen < Vorhilfe
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It was late in the evening when I got out off my limousine. Immediately I went into the festival room, where the big charity-gala took place and where I noticed a mixed odeur of Gucci and other perfumes.
This pompous room was filled with sixty well-dressed men and women and I guess that the dresses and the suits were only the most expensive ones.
While I handled out ma jacket to a servant,the next black and white penguin was coming to offer me a drink and to assign me my place. After that I went went to the comprehensive sideboard and took some caviar.
Only now I saw a woman with extentions in her long blond hair,synthetic finger nails und synthetic bust next to me.
Although she sat on on my table,too, she ignored me,but that was no wonder, because she was occupied with her bust all the time.
Directly when I reached my table, the chief of " children in misery" began his speech and he appealed us that we should be noble this evening, because it is for a good cause.
During the evening I only heard conversations, in which people showed of their ownerships.Everyone wanted to be better than the others and they talked at cross-purposes.
What selfish persons. In the end the chief pronounced with proudness the sum of our bounties and anyone had not got a guilty conscience, because of his or her ten Ferraris at home...
Vielen Dank im Vorraus
Liebe Grüße 
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(Mitteilung) Reaktion unnötig  | | Datum: | 02:20 Mi 20.02.2008 | | Autor: | matux |
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