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english discussion: Korrektur bitte!
Status: (Frage) beantwortet Status 
Datum: 16:40 So 30.03.2008
Autor: ray88

hallo,
könnt ihr mir das mal bitte korrigieren!? danke sehr!

Thinking of the past – boon or bane?
The past is a piece of every single person. Time passes and all we have are memories. Memories of a ’good old time’... A romantic love, a wild adolescence or a perfect holiday.
Such experiences mould us. We grow as a result of them, we become stronger and learn.
In hopeless situations we reflect on better times to create new bravery. That’s a strategy to survive. If we won’t do that, we couldn’t get new courage and the will to overcome reverses.
But of course, the previous life/foretime (?) is not just a time everybody likes. Some people made serious mistakes or experienced a stroke of fate that haunts them their whole lives.
Some never talk about their past, others want assimilate things of conversations.
Past touches everybody. Nobody can disclaim or change it. Everybody has to live with it.
Some people, especially older ones, always talking of their previous life. Of course, often their past is longer than the years, they already have to live and they experienced a lot but some escape in the ’good old times’. They don’t realize that they still have liveable years and that they can experience a lot of things now, too.
One thing, which is very imporant, is to learn from defeat. Everybody do mistakes but we shouldn’t do them a second or third time again. Of course sometimes it’s hard to realize or admit a defeat but that’s the only process to gain positive experiences.
People should live their life the best way they can. If they are old and maybe alone, the memory is the only thing that remains.
People expect from the past an orientation in the present and intelligence and wisdom for the future.
There is a famous proverb which states ’It's easier to forgive than forget’. That shows the importance of memories and that it’s hard to forget dramatic experiences in life.
In my opinion, it’s important to think about the past. People should reflect on positive situations and assimilate the negative ones. But we live now and the world is outside so nobody should reflect alone on/about (?) his/her previous life the whole time if he/she could make new experiences currently. It’s the same with the deliberation about future events. Of course it’s better to have an idea than to have none but it’s stupid to worry about the future if you are in existence now.


Ich habe diese Frage auch in folgenden Foren auf anderen Internetseiten gestellt:
http://www.uni-protokolle.de/foren/viewt/182510,0.html
http://forum.dict.cc/?pagenum=7383


        
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english discussion: Antwort
Status: (Antwort) fertig Status 
Datum: 10:23 Di 01.04.2008
Autor: Tyskie84

Hallo Ray!

> hallo,
>  könnt ihr mir das mal bitte korrigieren!? danke sehr!
>  
> Thinking of the past – boon or bane?
>  The past is a piece of every single person. Time passes
> and all we have are memories. Memories of a good old
> time, a romantic love, a wild adolescence or a perfect
> holiday.
>  Such experiences mould us. We grow as a result of them [mm] \red{and} [/mm] we
> become stronger and learn.
>  In hopeless situations we reflect on better times to
> create new bravery. That’s a strategy to survive. If we
> won’t do that, we couldn’t get new courage and the will to
> overcome reverses.
>  But of course, the previous life foretime (?) is not just
> a time everybody likes. Some people made serious mistakes
> or experienced a stroke of fate that haunts them their
> whole lives.
>  Some never talk about their past, others want assimilate
> things of conversations.
>  Past touches everybody. Nobody can disclaim or change it.
> Everybody has to live with it.
>  Some people, especially older ones, always talking [mm] \red{besser: about} [/mm]
> their previous life. Of course, often their past is longer
> than the years they already have to live and they
> experienced a lot but some escape in the ’good old times’.
> They don’t realize that they still have liveable years and
> that they can experience a lot of things now, too.
>  One thing, which is very imporant, is to learn from
> defeat. Everybody do mistakes but we shouldn’t do them a
> second or third time again. Of course sometimes it’s hard
> to realize or admit a defeat but that’s the only process to
> gain positive experiences.
>  People should live their life the [mm] \red{as good as they can}. [/mm] If
> they are old and maybe alone, the memory is the only thing
> that remains.
>  People expect from the past an orientation in the present
> and intelligence and wisdom for the future.
>  There is a famous proverb which states ’It's easier to
> forgive than forget’. That shows the importance of memories
> and that it’s hard to forget dramatic experiences in life.
>  In my opinion, it’s important to think about the past.
> People should reflect on positive situations and assimilate
> the negative ones. But we live now and the world is outside
> so nobody should reflect alone [mm] \red{on their} [/mm]
> previous life the whole time if he/she could make new
> experiences currently. It’s the same with the deliberation
> about future events. Of course it’s better to have an idea
> than to have none but it’s stupid to worry about the future
> if you are in existence now.
>  
>
> Ich habe diese Frage auch in folgenden Foren auf anderen
> Internetseiten gestellt:
>  http://www.uni-protokolle.de/foren/viewt/182510,0.html
>  http://forum.dict.cc/?pagenum=7383
>  

[anbet] Echt guter Text [super]

[hut] Gruß

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english discussion: Mitteilung
Status: (Mitteilung) Reaktion unnötig Status 
Datum: 22:30 Mi 02.04.2008
Autor: ray88

Danke für deine Hilfe Tyskie!

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